Feedback of main task

we asked a few peers and our teacher to watch our footage and give some
feedbacks to what was good and bad about our film.
Comment 1- I thought the twighlight shot of the bridge were atmospheric and quite eye catching. Which added to the good sense of mystery.
Comment 2- I thought the editing of the film and the themes were good, although they seemed too short, if made longer mybe could have been even more ineteresting.
Comment 3-They spent a lot of time on editing, but would have been better if worked effciatly and put more effort in their work from the begining. The storyline is good as it tries to potray young peoples lives in urban evironments. The could have finished filming faster which could have given them more time on editing and finishing of the blogg.
Comment 4- Could have tried filming in the day light and compared it to the filming in the dark to see what worked better.
Comment 5- The filming in twilight was great as they not having the equipment but were still able to get the lighting to work with the film.
Comment 6- The film is easier to relate to as a teenager, and the fact that the have kept the mysteriouse firgures identity a secret, it keeps their adience more interesting.
Comment 7- I think the voice over adds to the mystery and keeps the adience interested, although it tells abit about the film it does not give it all away, a bit like a cliff hanger.